D-stortion

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I am looking for critics and detailed reviews for my story Power of Bonds. If you feel up to the task, please drop one, it would be very appreciated. I am very open minded so if you review, go all out please. As in, find as many flaws as you can as if it was the goal because the only thing I seek is improvement and understanding of my flaws.

Blaze avatar was made by Speedofsoundsketches on tumblr.

Welcome welcome, please make yourself at home!

I write mostly Sonic x Blaze and Midna x TPLink stories as those two are my OTPs.

I may write slowly but I assure you I put all of my heart into my writing, I am constantly thinking about at least one of my stories and I apologize in advance for the slow updates.

8 March 2015:

Today, Between Dusk and Dawn broke the 100 reviews cap! Amazing! I never thought it'd happen so fast for this story woah.

Give it a look guys, I'm sure it's worth it if it got that many reviews.

16 February 2015:

Chapter 15 of Power of Bonds was uploaded. The short chapter was made to give more details about both the Egg-men's plan and Nega Hunter's physical description so that readers can imagine the towering beast more easily. I felt like this was very important to do before going further in the story.

2 February 2015:

Chapter 14 of Power of Bonds is ready to go but I am not posting it yet as I'm still not satisfied with one part of the chapter and it frustrates me to no end. I don't know what to do about it, if I don't find a solution then I'll just upload it before tomorrow.

25 January 2015:

I just published One Bad Joke. I wrote this in about one hour, motivated by the Kelvin's forum words.

20 January 2015:

I felt like this was worth saying: I have various crack couples in the Sonic series.

As in, couples that are not supposed to make sense.

There's one in particular that I love much more than the others, to the point that I will try as HARD as I can to make it have as much sense as possible. I'll leave finding which couple it is to your imagination. :)

18 January 2015:

I am D.stortion, 18 years old male and although my account might have been created a while ago, I never actually used it much until I started writing a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon fanfiction that I was so ashamed of I recently deleted it.

My favorite thing to do is writing fight scenes (preferably duels, I haven't written one with multiple characters to control) as I feel like it's where my writing can shine the best, not that it might shine much in some's eyes but it's where I can get really creative. I hope that in the future, I'll manage to write fight scenes so well that everyone will see it as my strong point.

My real first serious work would be Power of Bonds, a Sonic the hedgehog fan fiction I am working on, it started with an idea shortly after the release of Sonic Generations and right after I finished the game myself. After long, long thoughts about the story, about how I'd remodel it, about how much I wanted to write it again because of the foolishly wasted potential character development time traveling could give and also about how much I wanted to write a story with Sonic x Blaze being the main pairing, this story was born. This story is about friendship, about human relationships between animals, about love. This story is about strong bonds forged through the usual and unusual events of not so simple beings' lives.

My second serious work, albeit not as serious, is Between Dusk and Dawn, a Legend of Zelda story which is a crossover between Hyrule Warriors and Twilight Princess. We all cried at the end of Twilight Princess, Hyrule Warriors all gave us that warm feeling when we saw Midna again. So what did I do? I used Cia's wisdom, decided that she would notice that all the villains she summoned do get beaten by a Link at one point and that she needed somebody strong. And who's better than a heartbroken Hero that's hell bent on seeing his dear companion that left him to become Cia's new one man army? With just a few lies, the Link from Twilight Princess will cooperate and become the Dark Sorceress' bridge to her very own hero.

Another work of mine is a one shot, Twilight Warrior, that I can't really consider a serious work as it had been written on the spur of the moment, the moment Midna was announced for Hyrule Warriors. It took me one hour and a half of non stop writing before immediately uploading to FF.net.

Now for future works, I am still debating on whether or not I should write the title and the summary of them. Why? Because those would spoil the later chapters of Power of Bonds. Yes, I've already planned sequel/side stories for Power of Bonds, unsure of how many, but at least one sequel and one side story have been planned as of now.

One thing for sure that I can already spoil, one of those future story I want to write will be nearly entirely in the style of Bastion's narrating. To the point where the reader would hear the narrator's voice in their head because that voice would fit that story in particular as long as I do it right.

About reviews: I'm willing to "exchange" reviews with another writer and although I'm still a beginner at reviewing, I will do my best reviewing your chapter/story.

I don't usually reviews story that I read, the reason is that I often don't have much to say, I've been trying to get the habit of reviewing each story/chapter that I enjoy these days though but it's still not a habit yet.

If you want me to review a Sonaze (Sonic x Blaze) story, I'll do it for "free"! Just send me a PM and I'll give it a read, whether on FF.net or deviant art!

If you've got any questions, if you want to talk about anything with me or if you just want to say hi, drop me a PM.

CURRENTLY FOCUSING ON: Motivated enough to work on both at the same time.

Ongoing stories:

Power of Bonds: A Sonic Generations rewrite. It starts with Eggman Nega attacking Blaze with a new invention. He nearly manages to catch the cat when a mysterious event happens, ending up saving the cat's life but also bringing her in Sonic's dimension. Nega and Robotnik end up meeting again as they work together on the Time Eater, meanwhile Blaze has to live with Sonic until "something" happens.

Worried yet happy to finally see her friends again, Blaze deals with daily problems and events leading to unexpected meetings, interactions and friendships, such as with the infamous bat thief...

The story is mostly focusing on Blaze and her interactions with Sonic, as well as her interactions with the other characters she hadn't interacted with in the games.

Everything that shall happen to Blaze, Sonic, Tails and a large part of the rest of the cast will slowly make them develop, progress and (re)discover old and new parts of themselves.

For the romance part, the relationship between Blaze and Sonic with build up little by little, starting at the friendship stage and through their adventures they'll gradually appreciate each other more and more...

Current chapter: 15 - Rough Criminals - 2,395 words

Progression of next chapter: 16 - How Much Is That Kitty In The Window - 290 words

Main focus: Blaze, Sonic

Sub focus: Rouge, Tails, Shadow, Amy, Omega, Knuckles, Silver, Cream

Between Dusk and Dawn: An alternate scenario idea for Hyrule Warriors. Cia is gathering allies for her grand plan and finds that villains may not be the greatest of allies she could have. This give her the idea of looking through the multiple Links that have appeared through time to see if one of them would perhaps help her out.

On the verge of giving up after seeing that all of them have hearts too pure and resolves too strong, Cia notices that one Link is slightly different from the other. Unlike his predecessors, he isn't overjoyed after beating Ganondorf and saving all of Hyrule, in fact he is bitter.

Intrigued, Cia decides to take a look at his own adventure, and after realizing that it was because he lost a very dear friend, she plans to take advantage of this to bring him to her side.

A story where Link from Twilight Princess will have to fight what he had fought for and question what he had believed in to be able to be with Midna again.

A clash between two Master Swords and two Heroes bearing the triforce of courage, a war erupting over Cia's obsession and the sorrow of the Hero of Light and a fight that has more than simply getting rid of the darkness creeping in the lands...

Current chapter: 12 - Swayed - 1,902 words

Progression of next chapter: 13 - - 0 words

Main focus: TP Link, Cia

Sub focus: Ghirahim, HW Link, TP Midna, HW Zelda, HW Impa, Volga

Note: This story is one I write without much polishing and not as much thinking as I do for Power of Bonds, hence why I can write those chapters so quickly. I began this story to take a break whenever I wrote PoB so that I could relax while still writing.